Her teeth came first, like twin white spears,
They bucked out proud, no shame, no grace—
A smile that launched a thousand fears.
Like rabbits racing from her face.
Her chin? A crack, a cleft, a line—
A peach pit carved by grand design.
I stared, unsure if I should laugh,
Or ask if she could sign my calf.
She whispered, “Ready?”—I was not.
Her breath was like a coffee pot
That brewed old socks and garlic stew,
With hints of something once a shoe.
She puckered up, I held my breath,
Prepared to meet a kiss of death.
Our lips collided—wet and loud—
A sloppy smack that drew a crowd.
I tasted onions, gym bag funk,
A hint of tuna, maybe skunk.
She smiled and said, “Was that your first?”
I nodded, fighting back the thirst.
But even through the dental clash,
The chin divide, the breathy splash—
I felt a spark, a strange delight,
Like kissing wrong could still feel right.
So here’s to kisses, weird and wild,
To every awkward, stinky child
Who finds in flaws a kind of bliss—
The beauty in a busted kiss.
-jason
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3 responses to “My first kiss…”
I’m not sure whether to believe this is true or just make believe. It did make me smile and scrunch my nose too 😁.
Haha no it’s not true. Thank god right?
If it was true, that was an unusual experience 😀… a memory to cherish and also laugh, not at the person but the innocence of a young life.